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Is there anything you liked?
Anything at all

Or am I just wasting my time
And letting myself fall

I won't let you break me
Why can't you see

That piece of you
Is still a piece of me
*Insert words and phrases to make myself look emo and depressed here* :P

Don't know what else to write. XD
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thatcatchance Featured By Owner Aug 7, 2011
Where's the imagery, the metaphor, the symbolism, or a new perspective. An english doctor once told us sentimentalism is a terrible thing to put in poetry, and that's all this one has.
I don't get how this stuff is popular other than the fact that DA got money. I would think my stuff is great but no one sees it, and if it isn't, tear it apart so I learn. Anyways, I'm not gonna give DA money. I'm just gonna rebel and post links on premium, popular-for-no-discernable-reason works.

this is my favorite and will blow your socks off. [link]
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thatcatchance Featured By Owner Aug 7, 2011
though the drawing is well done
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ShinigamiMaxR Featured By Owner Jul 20, 2011
Sad? Yes. Emotionally charged? Probably.
Nevertheless, totally awesome;
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AnbuGirl26 Featured By Owner Jul 22, 2011  Hobbyist General Artist
Thank you²
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RyansAM Featured By Owner Jul 19, 2011
Sad? Yes. Emotionally charged? Probably.
Nevertheless, totally awesome; Picture and Quote.
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AnbuGirl26 Featured By Owner Jul 22, 2011  Hobbyist General Artist
Thank you :iconblushyplz:
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dutchess12534 Featured By Owner Jul 16, 2011  Hobbyist Digital Artist
I like how it rhymes...very nice.
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AnbuGirl26 Featured By Owner Jul 16, 2011  Hobbyist General Artist
Glad you liked it, rhyming is very difficult for me to do well.
I wish I could create rhymes that made more sense. XD
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dutchess12534 Featured By Owner Jul 19, 2011  Hobbyist Digital Artist
xD i know what you mean. sometimes i give up the sense of my words just so it rhymes =3= i wonder how rappers do it!
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SickToni Featured By Owner Jul 14, 2011  Hobbyist Photographer
really nice ;) like it.
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AnbuGirl26 Featured By Owner Jul 15, 2011  Hobbyist General Artist
Thanks, I'm glad you liked it. ^^
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SickToni Featured By Owner Jul 17, 2011  Hobbyist Photographer
just a small question. how did you do it? you draw it with colored pencils and than scan this picture?
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AnbuGirl26 Featured By Owner Jul 19, 2011  Hobbyist General Artist
Actually dear, I didn't draw that picture, as much as I wish I did. It was just something I found and thought it fit the poem nicely.
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SickToni Featured By Owner Jul 19, 2011  Hobbyist Photographer
Ah. Okay. But nice poem also ;)
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AnbuGirl26 Featured By Owner Jul 19, 2011  Hobbyist General Artist
Thank you. ^-^
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8-S-O-U-L-8 Featured By Owner Jul 14, 2011  Student Digital Artist
very emotional. i love it :)
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AnbuGirl26 Featured By Owner Jul 15, 2011  Hobbyist General Artist
I'm glad you loved it, felt better after writing it. ^^
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8-S-O-U-L-8 Featured By Owner Jul 15, 2011  Student Digital Artist
my pleasure!:)
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SkipperLee Featured By Owner Jul 14, 2011  Student Digital Artist
Many thanks for expressing this... I feel for you.
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AnbuGirl26 Featured By Owner Jul 15, 2011  Hobbyist General Artist
It was either this or punching a wall till I couldn't make a fist anymore so, you're welcome. And thank you, I'm glad that you understand the feelings.
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withinmeloveresides1 Featured By Owner Jul 14, 2011  Student Writer
Beautifully written
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AnbuGirl26 Featured By Owner Jul 15, 2011  Hobbyist General Artist
Thank you so much. :huggle:
And cute icon by the way. ^^
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withinmeloveresides1 Featured By Owner Jul 16, 2011  Student Writer
very welcome!
And danke! I like yours too. Very cool!
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uchiha2416 Featured By Owner Jul 14, 2011
awesome
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AnbuGirl26 Featured By Owner Jul 14, 2011  Hobbyist General Artist
Thank you very much.
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uchiha2416 Featured By Owner Jul 15, 2011
you welcome
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akatsukipikka Featured By Owner Jul 14, 2011  Student
nice ! but why you have to write something ? o.O someone raped you and is making you post things with a gun on your head ?!?!
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fangPS Featured By Owner Jul 14, 2011  Student Traditional Artist
Did you draw the pic. above?
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AnbuGirl26 Featured By Owner Jul 15, 2011  Hobbyist General Artist
No I did not, I take no credit for it whatsoever. If I knew who the artist was I'd happily share a link to them, but I don't.
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fangPS Featured By Owner Jul 15, 2011  Student Traditional Artist
But still, nice work!
If you need a artist for those drawing above, You always can ask me for those...For free! :D
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Wow i love the poem
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AnbuGirl26 Featured By Owner Jul 14, 2011  Hobbyist General Artist
Glad you loved it.
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alittlebitoffaith Featured By Owner Jul 13, 2011
I love this it's short to th point and I like th drawing above
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AnbuGirl26 Featured By Owner Jul 14, 2011  Hobbyist General Artist
Thank you, I'm glad you liked it.
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Azlo13hearts Featured By Owner Jul 13, 2011
From a writers perspective it's amazing
of course its sad
but then again the best peices of writing are emotion based.
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AnbuGirl26 Featured By Owner Jul 14, 2011  Hobbyist General Artist
Spoken like a true writer, thank you Ash, always manage to bring me back up. ^^
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ItachixXxUchiha Featured By Owner Jul 13, 2011  Hobbyist Digital Artist
whats the matter?
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:iconanbugirl26:
AnbuGirl26 Featured By Owner Jul 13, 2011  Hobbyist General Artist
Hm, oh nothing.
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Theshifter12712 Featured By Owner Jul 13, 2011
sad.... :(
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:iconanbugirl26:
AnbuGirl26 Featured By Owner Jul 13, 2011  Hobbyist General Artist
Yeah, sorry if I made your day darker. :(
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Theshifter12712 Featured By Owner Jul 13, 2011
yeah no I feel fine, just went to my dark place for a minute there
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AnbuGirl26 Featured By Owner Jul 13, 2011  Hobbyist General Artist
Is that good or bad? :(
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Theshifter12712 Featured By Owner Jul 13, 2011
its good, I'm back in my happy zone now so nothing to worry about :)
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YuukiaDivortion Featured By Owner Jul 13, 2011
sad...very sad
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AnbuGirl26 Featured By Owner Jul 13, 2011  Hobbyist General Artist
Sorry. :iconsighingplz:
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YuukiaDivortion Featured By Owner Jul 13, 2011
It's fine. Im used to sad things. -Since I am almost always sad-
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AnbuGirl26 Featured By Owner Jul 13, 2011  Hobbyist General Artist
Aw, well you can always talk to me when you're sad. :(
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YuukiaDivortion Featured By Owner Jul 13, 2011
thanks for letting me know that c:
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AnbuGirl26 Featured By Owner Jul 13, 2011  Hobbyist General Artist
You're very welcome, but yes, I'm here for you. :huggle:
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YuukiaDivortion Featured By Owner Jul 13, 2011
-Adds to Friend's list.- c: :glomp:
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