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Is there anything you liked?
Anything at all

Or am I just wasting my time
And letting myself fall

I won't let you break me
Why can't you see

That piece of you
Is still a piece of me
*Insert words and phrases to make myself look emo and depressed here* :P

Don't know what else to write. XD
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thatcatchance Featured By Owner Aug 7, 2011
Where's the imagery, the metaphor, the symbolism, or a new perspective. An english doctor once told us sentimentalism is a terrible thing to put in poetry, and that's all this one has.
I don't get how this stuff is popular other than the fact that DA got money. I would think my stuff is great but no one sees it, and if it isn't, tear it apart so I learn. Anyways, I'm not gonna give DA money. I'm just gonna rebel and post links on premium, popular-for-no-discernable-reason works.

this is my favorite and will blow your socks off. [link]
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thatcatchance Featured By Owner Aug 7, 2011
though the drawing is well done
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ShinigamiMaxR Featured By Owner Jul 20, 2011
Sad? Yes. Emotionally charged? Probably.
Nevertheless, totally awesome;
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AnbuGirl26 Featured By Owner Jul 22, 2011  Hobbyist General Artist
Thank you²
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RyansAM Featured By Owner Jul 19, 2011
Sad? Yes. Emotionally charged? Probably.
Nevertheless, totally awesome; Picture and Quote.
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AnbuGirl26 Featured By Owner Jul 22, 2011  Hobbyist General Artist
Thank you :iconblushyplz:
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dutchess12534 Featured By Owner Jul 16, 2011  Hobbyist Digital Artist
I like how it rhymes...very nice.
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AnbuGirl26 Featured By Owner Jul 16, 2011  Hobbyist General Artist
Glad you liked it, rhyming is very difficult for me to do well.
I wish I could create rhymes that made more sense. XD
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dutchess12534 Featured By Owner Jul 19, 2011  Hobbyist Digital Artist
xD i know what you mean. sometimes i give up the sense of my words just so it rhymes =3= i wonder how rappers do it!
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SickToni Featured By Owner Jul 14, 2011  Hobbyist Photographer
really nice ;) like it.
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