Where's the imagery, the metaphor, the symbolism, or a new perspective. An english doctor once told us sentimentalism is a terrible thing to put in poetry, and that's all this one has. I don't get how this stuff is popular other than the fact that DA got money. I would think my stuff is great but no one sees it, and if it isn't, tear it apart so I learn. Anyways, I'm not gonna give DA money. I'm just gonna rebel and post links on premium, popular-for-no-discernable-reason works.
this is my favorite and will blow your socks off. [link]